8 thoughts on “Challenge No.7

  1. The man with an iron leg, trudged to his home. He packed up unhurriedly since it was time to move to his own country in Asia.

    He was done packing and was ready to head home. He hopped into his car and drove staring at the sky, grey with no clouds. It had seemed that it was going to rain heavily. Suddenly, as he drove by, a beautiful woman captivated him. He braked hardly, opened the door and ran towards the girl and kneeled. He asked to be his girl, and the girl admitted affirmative. The background was the clear, blue lake and the sky turned blue as the man smiled.

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  2. THE FORTRESS OF ANTUMBA

    In the shallow, icy lake stands an impenetrable fortress, full of the best of outlaws and fallen barbarians. Inside, stands a kneeling statue of the frozen king. The prisoners are still captivated by the statue as they are forced to smash iron and steel. Smoke fills the icy air as the banging resonates an echo in the prison.
    Every day, they are forced to admit their crimes and swear they never do it again.

    As you are reading, your role is the guard warden, lieutenant commander of the first regiment. You may enter now.

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  3.                                                         The Captivating Lake

    In one universe far away from us, grew a dream planet that everyone dreamed of living there. That place was as peaceful as heaven, as dreamy as the sunset on the beach, and as beautiful as shimmering stars. To admit, it was the perfect location for everyone. But under the planet, was a different place. In there, mysterious creatures loomed around, telling the visitors to leave or kneel and obey them. It was a strange sight to see that under a pretty planet lied a scary place covered by iron. But the dreamy planet was famous for its lake where its water was clear.

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  4. On one eventful day, there was a 9 year old girl named Lila. Lila was a kind-hearted and courageous girl. On her 10th birthday her mom gave Lila an iron, sliver robo dog. Lila loved the robo dog and named it cupcake.

    The next day, Lila and cupcake went on a walk to the captivating park they kneeled on and saw the crystal-clear lakes and emerald lush green trees, cupcake licked Lila at her face while smiling.

    “I admit you’re really fun to play with” Lila whispered as she smiled at the multi-colored rainbow. They hugged each other and went back to their sweet home.

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  5. Boy

    Once upon a time lived a boy named Bolt. Bolt was so clumsy he fell off a cliff and bellow the cliff was a lake filled with iron, and he kneeled to admit to God that “I’m sorry I am not supposed to listen to my mom,” said Bolt “Don’t go near the the end it’s dangerous” said Bolt mother “ I was too captivated.”It’s fine I will let you go but remember listen to your mom ok. Then Bolt came back to his mother lap and started his life again. The END

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  6. Mr Brown was my favourite plumber. My parents were never there for me when I needed them, Mr Brown always was. My parents were rarely home, Mr Brown was. Mr Brown captivated me, I never wanted him to leave my sight, but it was hard to admit that to him because he had a wife he kneeled down for and a daughter to take care of at home. I didn’t want to sound selfish. He has been working with my parents for years now, the toilet is perfectly fine, but he’d been lying that it was broken, to take care of me. Mr Brown loved the lakeside; he said it reflected like iron.

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  7. Once there lived a backup soldier named Jason, he believed in god very much no matter what anyone says.

    One day, he came upon a lake and kneeled down

    “Dear god,” Jason admitted. “I don’t understand why you can’t make me get promoted into a real soldier, and not a backup one.” Suddenly a huge iron block appeared in the lake and it said, you made your wish, don’t take this for granted, Jason was captivated by the iron block.

    The very next day, the head soldier disappeared randomly, and Jason became the head leader “This isn’t what I wanted,” Jason said. “I don’t want my leader to disappear.”

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  8.                                            The Girl at the Lake

    Once upon a time, there was a little girl called Mani, she loved to go to the lake.

    But one day she admitted because she kneeled, and her legs got into an iron.

    Ever since then she never went to the iron shop again.

    Then one day she walked to the lake again and wished that she will never get hurt again. The lake did what Mani asked for.

    The next day, the lake turned black because it used all of it’s power and the lake was dead.

    Mani was captivated by the lake turning black.

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