10 thoughts on “Challenge No.11

  1. The hated-animal city

     Lila was a 11-year-old spy who lived by herself in a hated-animal city that meant no animals allowed!! Well, for Lila she loved animals and sneaking around to feed her cute dog, Olive. But sadly a few days before, Olive got captured by the government. Lila was depressed so she decided to get her dog back. As she marched frantically into the government building she saw a bunch of animals laying down tearfully. She used her easy-to-lock key to free all the animals and especially her dog, Olive. In the end they both moved to a private island together.

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  2. Once upon a time lived a girl named Everly. When she was 14 years old, a boy at the back of her class was crowned the most handsome teenager in the world and Everly was the nerd.

    Everyday everyone was picking on her until the boy at the back of the class saw and the prom was 3 days later. And he didn’t have a date, so he picked Everly.

    Three days later, she marched frantically into the party and saw the boy at the back of the class cheating on her so she left the party and told the police so the boy at the back of that class so she’ll get revenge.

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  3.                                                                            WORLD WAR 1

    World war 1 was a big mistake. Adolf Hitler started World War 1. He was an important guy for Germany, he ruled the land and even wanted to be the strongest country in the entire world. He wanted to invade Poland to take their territory. As Germany won, Hitler was so happy. As he marched frantically into the Poland area, he was full of joy and happiness, but the worst thing happened. England wanted to attack Germany because they took Poland. Germany was soon destroyed with Adolf Hitler on the ground with his tears coming out. He said, “One day I am going to get my revenge” …

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  4. Mike In the Palace

    One peaceful day, Mike woke up and saw that the weather was nice, so he thought of an idea of sneaking into the palace. When he reached the palace, he was shocked to see how big it was. He tried and tried for hours and hours to see a security guard standing right in front of him.

    Somehow Mike jumped over so now he was in the run outside of the palace. Finally, the door to the palace was in front of him. As he marched frantically into the palace he gasped.

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  5. THE MISSING CHILD

    One day, when it was nighttime, the family were settling for a warm sleep. The mother was showering upstairs as she heard a shriek from the living room’s door. The mom was frightened. Was it a robbery? What could it be?

    The mom dressed up in a hurry and sprinted downstairs to look what – on -earth made that sound. She investigated the whole house. Soon then, as she marched frantically into the kid’s bedroom, she knew her baby was missing. Her heart beated quicker each second.

    As she was about to sleep, a door opened. It was her baby, dressed in a Christmas costume.

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  6.                                                      The Terrifying Note

    One gloomy, rainy day, a girl called Hannah was left at home doing her homework. After a while, she was bored to death knowing that she had to finish her homework. For a break, she made a quick snack to relieve the onset of boredom.

    When she came back, on top of her large pile of homework was a note written in a weird font. In a few seconds, she was able to understand the message saying “go into the portal or else…” As she marched fanatically into the portal, a familiar voice whispered “don’t!”

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  7. My name is Eleanor and I was an unwealthy slave who worked for the Everley family. The Everley family were royalty and I had to work for them. My classmates would often bully me for my poorness, but everyday people would question me because I looked like princess Everley. I never thought about the similarities between me and her but one day this happened.

    “My name is close to Everley. My last name is Graham just like Everley’s. My hair is also blonde” I thought. As I marched frantically into the palace everybody gave me a weird look.

    I am yo-” said the king

    “ Shush dad I wanna say it, your making it emotional” murmured Everley “ I’m your sister” she confronted.

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  8. “Sorry, boss,” the young intern mumbled, her cheeks reddening. She had overslept again, and the subway was packed to the brim with rush hour commuters. She had squeezed through the crowd, her heart racing, knowing she was cutting it close. As she marched frantically into the office, the clack of her heels echoed down the sterile corridor, punctuating the silence that seemed to stretch on forever. She felt every pair of eyes on her, judging her, but she had to keep going. She couldn’t let her nerves get the best of her. She then walked into her office to start her shift.

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  9. Princess Everley’s life was always hidden. No one knew who she was. No one knew where she lived. No one, except her mother. You might wonder, why? But, Everley was fine with it. She never wanted so much attention anyway. She never really cared. But one thing that always had Everley wondering about was “the forbidden room” down, the hall. She questioned,

    “Mother, what’s in that room down the hall?”

    But she always had the same answer,

    “Sweetheart, you don’t, want, to know.”

    Everley had enough, she was going down there, she wasn’t going to wonder any-longer. As she marched frantically into the room, she heard a small scream…

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  10. Horror Doll

    The old man sat on the porch, squinting at the sunset. He held a cup of tea in his weathered hands. He heard a noise, and a child said it was nothing, but he still had a curiosity that never faded. He watched the middle school student playing on the swings downstairs in the dormitory. Suddenly, a little girl stood in front of him holding the scary doll. There was a scream, and the middle school student fell to the ground. The old man ran over to tell another middle school student in the dormitory, but it was too late. As she frantically walked into the bathroom, the doll gave her an evil smile.

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