Challenge No. 20

Your challenge this week is to continue this story below:
When Amelia opened the suitcase she bought from the mysterious thrift store, she didn’t expect to find a map leading to another dimension, a place where every wrong decision she had made was set right; but this world had its own secrets, and she was now a part of them.

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  1. When Amelia opened the suitcase she bought from the mysterious thrift store, she didn’t expect to find a map leading to another dimension, a place where every wrong decision she had made was set right; but this world had its own secrets, and she was now a part of them. The map was different. Mysterious symbols engraved into it. The air shifted from a loud demeanor to a silence. Amelia gasped as the world around her changed. The city was gone. Before she could know it, she was in a completely different place. Trembling in fear she couldn’t move. Everything in her way froze, as if time didn’t work in the special world. Stone pillars towered over her. Moss covered everething. The air was dense and foggy. A man appeared infront of her. He looked at her.  “Tatakae.”  With a jump Amelia woke up. She was relived it was just a dream.

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  2. She awakened from her deep slumber in a new world. But what was this majestic new world, it was a world, where all of your imagination comes in blocks, where you could fight bad mobs. As she was meandering through the gloomy, damp night, out of a corner Amelia heard a slight growl in the bushes nearby, but when she put her head above the bushes a dog appeared. Roof! The dog barked loudly, it had red, deadly eyes full of blood, as he growled. Luckily she found a thick, fat bone, and when she gave it to the dog it happened…   

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  3. She curiously tried to explore, put her hand in and out, and suddenly she was sucked into the four-dimensional space. “Everything is so magical and dreamy.” Amelia thought to herself. During this period, she encountered many interesting and strange things and creatures. She did the same things and actions every day, and she felt more and more bored. She suddenly had a thought in her mind that he wanted to leave. After two hours, an idea suddenly came to her mind. “If I came from that mysterious suitcase, then I can go back from there.” After a long time, she finally found the suitcase. She was sucked into it and returned to the three-dimensional world. She returned to his happy life.

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  4. When she opened her eyes she saw her problems be fixed her family never died, she got the perfect grades and her brother never went on alcohol so she believed nothing will go wrong. Until, she saw a dragon in the sky and burnt her home to dust and she fell unconscious. When she woke up she saw a man in robes dragging her to a shed. When Amelia went in the shed she saw a bunch of other people in the shed when she got food all of the people rushed to get it so she didn’t get much, then she thought when would she would go home.

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  5. As Amelia observed the new world that was before her she took in the freash breeze of the air in this new dimension she heard a sound. The sound said “whats’s wrong champ good job in winning your track and field torniment yesterday.”
    When she heard that she was confuse and deep in thought. Then she heard the voice again
    “Hello are you even listening”
    After those words she was snape back to reality then by pure instit she replied by saying.
    “Thanks I really apreshate it.”
    As she was slowly turning towards the voice she woke up in her bedroom sweet all over her.

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  6. As Amelia closed her eyes a curious sensation came up her arm, where was she?
    Cloudtopia the people who were in Cloudtopia were the most honest people in the world!
    And they wish to keep it that way, if anybody ever lied they would face a serious penalty…
    But then she saw a bright light she hadn’t realized she had closed her eyes then Amelia saw her room in sight, it was just a dream! Relieved, Amelia took a huge sigh of relief and went down to have breakfast but then she wondered” Why is it still dark outside?”

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